Posted in Poetry, Teens Lane

Natural Forces

As the Owls hoot
So the heart speaks
Of a desolate stream
which underneath lies a green foot.

Adored! Is the Olive tree
For its leaves and Silky oil
but once goes into the soil
was its tiny seed

A realm of frozen dreams
wry smiles and gray hope
but along it clings onto a rope
in a to-and-fro motion the heart leaps

A crooked surface which underneath
lies a thing of goodness
for though strings of sadness
seems endless, a being breathe

Like the seed that grows
morning rays shows what should be
got lips of fate’s negativity still
for, a seed doth grow, a thing the heart should know!


A little something about me! How about we go straight. Putting everything in written words, is definitely what i am obsessed with. Though i live in a world of science (a student of Chemistry/Biochemistry) which i also do love a lot too but when science runs wild and gets complicated, i run to my world of art to get things back in shape... to get my head a little less entangled in the web of science. Lets say i just love to maintain a balance between the two and writing my thoughts helps a lot with that. So my interest in blogging is built on my love for writing, everything goes down in written words. I say I write anything write able; from shorts articles to books (mostly fictional...) I love poetry, inspiring articles and short stories, nature, funny quotes and photos, everything that's gotta do with worthy creativity! Like i said, its all in words, my experience, life lessons and thoughts will be going here. If it turns out poetic, that'll be perfect! Sending positive and hopeful signals to a needing heart and restoring smiles to a grief stricken face gives breath and life it self... so my life literally can only be described as fulfilling when I am of positive help to others. If people could get the feelings attached to my written words, that'll be a job well done for me, So i am looking forward to that! I wrote once that what the poet's pen has written down, carries a lot more that the seeming words scribbled down on the surface, its deeper than you think, its sublime... it carries more than you can imagine... i think that's what i am about! Meeting and learning literally from new people is a dream come true, i hope i'd get that from you. I might never have the right words in a difficult phase but scorn vs being will definitely be pacific! Hey! The name is Jameelah! Thanks for the visit and looking forward to what Fate has in store for me and you! :)

8 thoughts on “Natural Forces

  1. I like to think of a seed as a powerful metaphor for spiritual matters. Like the mustard seed, which is one of tiniest of seeds. But as it grows, it grows into an amazingly huge tree where the birds come and find a comfortable place to perch.
    Have you read my post, The Bamboo Tree? ( – I love how the growing process of the bamboo seed happens. Very intense metaphor indeed.


  2. Oh, I could relate so well to your piece on the bamboo tree,
    I have same thoughts as you on that aspect, actually what trigered me to write this.

    It takes time, strain and some discomfort but a seed do grow, gradually, it grows and before you know it, its a big strong tree which others adore!

    This growth in nature’s zone can be related to human growth and affairs as well.
    A thing might appear to be a complete success now but it didnt just happened, something was done for that to come to life and at some point, it was just a single act that looked meaningless!
    So i think a short trip to ‘Nature Zone’ can help feed your eyes with awesomeness but the true meal lies looked behind the covers, there is a message it holds, an inspiring one to be precise!

    Thanks Staci, alot had been learnt from you 🙂 ❤


  3. Wow, thats lovely!
    I love the way it all came, at first it was hard for me to actually comprehend what it was but then it all came back to me,

    Amazing piece indeed, ‘Natural Forces’, just perfect! 🙂


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