As the Owls hoot
So the heart speaks
Of a desolate stream
which underneath lies a green foot.
Adored! Is the Olive tree
For its leaves and Silky oil
but once goes into the soil
was its tiny seed
A realm of frozen dreams
wry smiles and gray hope
but along it clings onto a rope
in a to-and-fro motion the heart leaps
A crooked surface which underneath
lies a thing of goodness
for though strings of sadness
seems endless, a being breathe
Like the seed that grows
morning rays shows what should be
got lips of fate’s negativity still
for, a seed doth grow, a thing the heart should know!
Life in Written Words 
Wow! This is brilliantly amazing. 🙂
“Adored! Is the Olive tree
For its leaves and Silky oil
but once goes into the soil
was its tiny seed”…….such an intense! You have put it creatively and smartly.
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Well, i must say nature and human are related in a special kindda way.
Cant really explain much of it though, but i’m glad you loved it the way it is 🙂 ❤
Thank you for taking the time! 🙂
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My pleasure! Agree that nature has so much that we cannot squeeze in all, though we would love to.
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🙂 🙂
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I like to think of a seed as a powerful metaphor for spiritual matters. Like the mustard seed, which is one of tiniest of seeds. But as it grows, it grows into an amazingly huge tree where the birds come and find a comfortable place to perch.
Have you read my post, The Bamboo Tree? ( http://stacilys.wordpress.com/2014/08/18/the-bamboo-tree/) – I love how the growing process of the bamboo seed happens. Very intense metaphor indeed.
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Oh, I could relate so well to your piece on the bamboo tree,
I have same thoughts as you on that aspect, actually what trigered me to write this.
It takes time, strain and some discomfort but a seed do grow, gradually, it grows and before you know it, its a big strong tree which others adore!
This growth in nature’s zone can be related to human growth and affairs as well.
A thing might appear to be a complete success now but it didnt just happened, something was done for that to come to life and at some point, it was just a single act that looked meaningless!
So i think a short trip to ‘Nature Zone’ can help feed your eyes with awesomeness but the true meal lies looked behind the covers, there is a message it holds, an inspiring one to be precise!
Thanks Staci, alot had been learnt from you 🙂 ❤
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Wow, thats lovely!
I love the way it all came, at first it was hard for me to actually comprehend what it was but then it all came back to me,
Amazing piece indeed, ‘Natural Forces’, just perfect! 🙂
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Awww 🙂
thank you so much dear! ❤ I'm glad you liked it
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